Visuals tell a story faster and leave a bigger impact than a wall of text. Is there a way you could turn some of the most important messages into visuals? For example, "it could take weeks to restore electricity" - having a calendar view or animation of this with perhaps comparable situations that happened elsewhere.
For food and water, show pictures of what someone should have on hand for a family of 4.
Your main message is go buy water and canned food but that doesn't appear until 3/4 of the way down the page. Research kits that people can buy at their favourite local stores or online and have a clear call to action for people to buy one of them now. If someone visits and leaves the page by buying a kit without reading any of the information, that's going to help them way more than reading and absorbing all the info but without buying a kit. If there's no good kits that you think are worth buying, that could be a good business opportunity. Make your own and sell that.
The sources take up way too much space. That section could be made much smaller.
I prefer to avoid having commercial links and don't intend to make this a business, but I'll see if I can reduce the text. the challenge is trying to keep this a reference and explain things properly
Some feedback:
- It's obviously AI created
- There's way too much text
Visuals tell a story faster and leave a bigger impact than a wall of text. Is there a way you could turn some of the most important messages into visuals? For example, "it could take weeks to restore electricity" - having a calendar view or animation of this with perhaps comparable situations that happened elsewhere.
For food and water, show pictures of what someone should have on hand for a family of 4.
Your main message is go buy water and canned food but that doesn't appear until 3/4 of the way down the page. Research kits that people can buy at their favourite local stores or online and have a clear call to action for people to buy one of them now. If someone visits and leaves the page by buying a kit without reading any of the information, that's going to help them way more than reading and absorbing all the info but without buying a kit. If there's no good kits that you think are worth buying, that could be a good business opportunity. Make your own and sell that.
The sources take up way too much space. That section could be made much smaller.
Thanks for taking the time!
I prefer to avoid having commercial links and don't intend to make this a business, but I'll see if I can reduce the text. the challenge is trying to keep this a reference and explain things properly